Chapter 3

Page 05

Page 05
20th August 2014
The Floating Isle rarely has any non-winged visitors, so it's not going to be easy... Still, Apple and Bread are resourceful and surely they'll have some guidance! C:

I always see room for improvement when I finish a page, but there's no point in re-doing them forever! Onwards and upwards, I've got a lot to learn yet~ n___n
20th Aug 2014, 8:52 AM
Really like the chitter chatter of these teagulls, very bird-like :)
20th Aug 2014, 7:18 PM
Thanks! That is what I was aiming for, glad it worked out~ n___n
20th Aug 2014, 9:05 AM
Honestly, the only part of this page that seems off to me is Sour Apple's second expression, so it kind of confuses me that you say so much is wrong with the page.

As for the second expression, I find fear and shock look better if you add an arc or two a little off the outer side of each eye, but that's just what makes it look right in my art style. Might not work as well here.
20th Aug 2014, 7:19 PM
Aw, I didn't say so much was wrong with it, just that there are many areas that I want to improve on~ Mostly composition and flow.
(You're right, though, that expression is a little off. Maybe I'll go back and change it). :>
20th Aug 2014, 12:20 PM
Aww. So helpful. :3
20th Aug 2014, 7:19 PM
That's what guardian teagulls are here for! :D
20th Aug 2014, 4:39 PM
I think you're doing very well!
20th Aug 2014, 7:19 PM
Thank you for the encouragement! C:
20th Aug 2014, 4:51 PM
The floating isle looks so cool...I'd certainly wanna visit!
20th Aug 2014, 7:20 PM
>u< me too! Thankyou~
21st Aug 2014, 1:34 AM
Terra firma, eh? I like it! So is that a magical version of Earth? :P

I like how the teagull completely ignores poor Apple's wishes to not be called a pinecone, hehe!
21st Aug 2014, 7:34 AM
It's "solid earth" in latin~ C: I just meant the solid part of the island n____n

Haha! Poor Apple, yeah, that teagull isn't going to pander to her... o u o!